After reviewing one of my final documentary drafts with my target audience focus group, I decided that I needed to follow a more structure focusing more on narrative. Therefore, I am now in the process of adapting my documentary to fit Todorov's narrative theory. I will do this by adding in a voiceover as a 'presenter' role over videos throughout. The disruption of the equilibrium will be her accident as told towards the end, and then the repairing is also addressed after this and the progress she has made.
Theory outlined see here:
