Sunday, May 3, 2020

Revision of Pitch

When looking back at my original pitch and with all of the new and much more in depth research that I have now done, I realise that I could make it much more specific.
When writing that I was unsure on what to have the main focus of my documentary on - I knew that I wanted it about sports and horse riding just not enough.
Here is the link to my original pitch, where I explained how it would be able to meet the brief, how I can encourage audience engagement, and using digital convergence.
https://602216607.blogspot.com/2020/03/planning-pitch.html
However, as this documentary is for BBC 3 it needs to fit in with their previous documentaries and what you would be likely to see as part of them. After looking on their website and carrying out more research into this I decided that my documentary would be about a girls struggles with mental health, and how she coped with sports - in particular horse riding - helping her. I feel as though this may be a lot more relatable for some people and also interesting even if its not. Having a story will be much more entertaining and easier to watch and follow.
I also now think that voiceovers could be really powerful if included. For example I am thinking about starting the documentary reading out statistics that could shock people, and maybe interest them to want to watch more.

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FINAL PRODUCT

 Final documentary link https://vimeo.com/535582659